A Day at the Shy Guy Store

[SuperMarioFanX100]

This is a story I made in the shoutbox. I decided it was good enough to post. Finished after a few setbacks.
Characters include, Me, Nintendan and General Guy.



I went to the Shy Guy store today.......
I walked in and was treated with so many Shy Guys of so many colors!
There was Red, white, black, blue, purple, orange and lots of other colors!
It was so nice to be around other Shy Guys like me.
I got my Shy Guy cart and started looking around for some groceries.
And there I saw it. It was so beautiful.
My favourite cereal was actually in stock! OMGZ! They're never in stock!
They were just looking at me.... We both knew we were destined for each other.
And as I headed for the box of Nom Nom's, I saw him. Nintendan.
We both knew we wanted the box of Nom Nom's. We gave each other deathly looks.
None of us made a move. Yet.
I was closer to the box.
There was only one left in stock.
And then it got worse.
General Guy came from behind Dan. He also immediately saw the box as well.
It was going to be a Free For All.
As Nintendan noticed General Guy, I jumped into action. I ran towards the box of Nom Nom's.
However Dan kicked the shopping cart he had and it pushed me away.
Dan ran towards the box, with General Guy Following.
I got up, and started for the box as well.
Nintendan was fast and got to the box first.
He jumped up and got to top of one of the 2 sides of the isle top things.
He yelled out one of his Signature YeeHaws.
General guy laughed and took out a big red button. He pushed it and the isle thing that Dan was standing on exploded, flinging Dan into the air.
Dan let go of the box as he flew through the air.
I jumped into action again. I ran towards the spot where the box looked where it would've landed.
Then it was a race between me and General Guy. We were shoulder to shoulder.
The box fell near the dairy section of the Shy Guy store.
Then, out of the blue, Nintendan came from behind us riding on a Segway! WTF!
He zipped passed us and picked up the box of Nom Nom's as he turned towards the cash register.
I thought to myself 'Crackers!' and tried running faster.
Then from behind, a mini tank followed us.
General guy jumped on it. And took the wheel. 'figures it was his' I thought to myself.
He started shooting at Dan.
Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom!
I was surprised. Dan was managing himself well admits the shots being fired at him
Dan finally reached the register.
"Hello! I'd like to buy this! NAO!" Dan yelled.
I thought it was over. Dan had won. But General Guy had other thoughts.
General guy shot the Cash Register.
Dan, once again, was flung into the air. However he was joined with the register Shy Guy too.
The box of Nom Nom's was once again in noone's hands.
General guy then drove towards the Box. It was now near the toy area.
I could never catch up to him, I thought. Then I saw Dan's Segway. I had my chance again.
I got on it and followed General Guy.
Since the Segway was faster than General Guy's Tank, I quickly caught up to him.
Soon enough, I past him.
Unfortunatly, It came with a risky price.
As soon as General Guy was far away from me, He started shooting.
BOOM! BOOM BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!
I continously zig zagged my way towards the Cereal Box.
Good things come to those who wait, they say.
It's true.
I got the box and turned towards the dairy section, making it my detour towards the cash registers.
As I left the Toy area, I disrupted one of those bouncy ball triangle towers.
It tramped General Guy's Tank.
"Yes!" I thought to myself.
I waved the box in the air as celebration!
Unfortunatly Dan came back.
He swooped from the air on a little fighter plane.
I was starstruck.
Again. "WTF!"
Dan once again had the upper hand.
He was going to win. It was game over.
It seemed hopeless.
And it was.
Dan continued. Giving another YeeHaw in celebration.
I was angry.
I shook my fist at him.
He succesfully bought the box of Nom Nom's.
He pranced out of the store.
I just watched.
I also left the store, there was no meaning left to shop anymore.
As I went to my Shy Guy car, I saw Dan Again. He was having trouble finding the right key to the door.
I've been in that situation before.
He had the Nom Nom's in the other hand.
I wanted to steal them.
I didn't care about the consequences.
I ran towards him.
He didn't notice me yet.
I had my chance.
Then.
CRASHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! KABOOM!
General Guy had crashed his car right into Dan, right into his car. It ended with an explosion.
I couldn't believe General Guy did that!
Talk about obsessed.
The scene was horrific.
Did anyone survive?
All what was......... nothing.
Then a box fell from the Sky.
It was the Nom Nom's. But they were burnt.
The were inedible now.
I sighed.
There goes 10 straight days of an awesome breakfast.
Then Nintendan and General Guy fell from the sky face first.
Ouch. But luckily Shy Guys are durable.
They got up and we all stared at the box.
It was an akward moment.
I decided enough was enough.
I left the parking lot in my Shy Guy car.
Nintendan and General guy took the bus.
I was right behind them. Then on the other lane came down, going towards the store, a truck of Nom Nom boxes.
We all knew we all saw it.
I made a U turn and turned back towards the store.
Unknown to me Nintendan karate Chopped the Bus driver and hijacked the Bus. They turned the bus around, hitting a few cars with the wide U turn.
The chase was on. Again.

 

[Mr.L]

I really like stories including members of the community, well done.

 

[Yoshi64Mario]

Interesting storyline! Will you be making a second edition that follows up from the first?

 

[SuperMarioFanX100]

Maybe not some sort of sequel.... but definatly I might make another story like this one.

 

[Red Koopa]

Very good story there CR! If you make another, i'll be sure to see it.

 

[(DL)]

Epic win. Three great member coming together in an epic battle to get the cereal. I expect a sequel, good sir!

 

[NintenDan]

I couldn't help but laugh when I got on the segway; I wouldn't mind a sequel either, heh.