Dimensions and Time side-story:How SSF(Me) went to Mario world

[SupahSonicFan]

SSF:I'm bored,I think I'll go for a walk.
SSF went to the park.
SSF:I haven't heard of Yoshian,I hope he's ok.
Delivery Manackage for Supah Sonic Fan!!
SSF signs for package.
SSF:Cool,a watch*reads label* a dimensional travel watch.I'll open a portal.
*opens portal*SSF:Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!*gets sucked into portal*
SSF's thoughts:Who's that guy with Mario and Luigi

My lines in Dimensions and Time comes after this.

 

[Vivian]

This'll get you a D- from me.
Tales of speed was better. Sorry SSF, seriously. You're pretty much blatantly copying yoshain with the format here.

 

[SupahSonicFan]

Dude this is a side story to Yoshian's story,what did you expect?

 

[go away hernandez]

Oh god....

just...WHY.

WHY DID YOU POST THIS.

This is ATRCIOUS.

It's TERRIBLE.

Tales of SPEED was better than this,SSF.

Don't just copy off what Yoshian is doing- make your own ideas.

 

[SupahSonicFan]

THIS IS A SIDE STORY TO DIMENSIONS AND TIME,WHAT...DID.....YOU...EXPECT???????

 

[go away hernandez]

I expect something BETTER THAN THIS.

And don't just make a WHOLE thread about it...make a post in the ALREADY EXSISTING THREAD.

 

[Member]

I added it to Chapter 5 of Dimensions & Time. I just made a bit tweaks, but it is still the same.