My pokemon fan fiction...

Chapter 7 is now up and I would like to have some feedback. You can say it here or there I just want to know how you feel about my story.
 
Chapter eight was up since sunday night and pokemon make another return and at the end of this one there's something i'm hoping someone will answer right for they have a chance to choose the details for a future character if they're the first to get it right.
 
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