So I really don't know how you guys feel about this, but I like to write. Mostly creepy suff. So under this I will post the first part of a story I wrote. And I would like you guys to tell me what you think of it.
I would suggest reading this in a dark enviroment with only the light of the screen. Also, for a background setting, please turn on a youtube track with rain and thunder sounds.
I am a fan of dan, that's why I made this story.
*WARNING: This story is based on ALMOST true events. Dan, I am sorry about this.
October, 25, 2012
It was raining heavilly outside. She just stepped out of the door into the rain. It had been a long day. She missed him everyday since the accident. Dan had been gone for over a week now. Nobody heared from him since. When she thought back to the day she was first informed about the tragic event, tears started welling up again. She loved him so much, how could she not have noticed? She knew he was changing, she had just ignored it for as long as she could. But how much longer would she be able to carry on?
She knew he had not forgotten her. She knew he was still out there somewhere.... He just changed.. that's all. She walked for several miles whilst being lost in thoughts about everything that happened, so she did not notice it at first. But now, the moment she awoke from her thoughts she noticed it. Something was off. Something did not seem right. She could not put a finger on it, but still, it felt like something was wrong on a fundamental level. By now she had been soaked with rain and she was almost back home. She walked this road every single day and never had any problem. It was a verry peacefull town in which she lived and not much happened. The last murder had taken place over 15-years ago. And it wasn't even really a murder, it was more of an unfortunate accident with a pair of scissors.
All of a sudden she felt the urge to look behing her. This urge confused her because she had heared nothing odd, or someone behind her. Still, she looked.... All she saw was the silhout of a very tall person in the distance. Just standing there, nothing more. Even more, there seemed to be something wrong with his face, but he was to far away to see what it was...
To be continued?
So let me know what you guys think and before I continue I think I should get dans Approval so yeah
Cheers...
I would suggest reading this in a dark enviroment with only the light of the screen. Also, for a background setting, please turn on a youtube track with rain and thunder sounds.
I am a fan of dan, that's why I made this story.
*WARNING: This story is based on ALMOST true events. Dan, I am sorry about this.
October, 25, 2012
It was raining heavilly outside. She just stepped out of the door into the rain. It had been a long day. She missed him everyday since the accident. Dan had been gone for over a week now. Nobody heared from him since. When she thought back to the day she was first informed about the tragic event, tears started welling up again. She loved him so much, how could she not have noticed? She knew he was changing, she had just ignored it for as long as she could. But how much longer would she be able to carry on?
She knew he had not forgotten her. She knew he was still out there somewhere.... He just changed.. that's all. She walked for several miles whilst being lost in thoughts about everything that happened, so she did not notice it at first. But now, the moment she awoke from her thoughts she noticed it. Something was off. Something did not seem right. She could not put a finger on it, but still, it felt like something was wrong on a fundamental level. By now she had been soaked with rain and she was almost back home. She walked this road every single day and never had any problem. It was a verry peacefull town in which she lived and not much happened. The last murder had taken place over 15-years ago. And it wasn't even really a murder, it was more of an unfortunate accident with a pair of scissors.
All of a sudden she felt the urge to look behing her. This urge confused her because she had heared nothing odd, or someone behind her. Still, she looked.... All she saw was the silhout of a very tall person in the distance. Just standing there, nothing more. Even more, there seemed to be something wrong with his face, but he was to far away to see what it was...
To be continued?
So let me know what you guys think and before I continue I think I should get dans Approval so yeah
Cheers...
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