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Hey, guys.
Since it's the 10th episode, I thought I should do something special! How about I show you guys the script for Trance? I've been working on it for a while now and I know it feels like it's gonna take forever.
Here's a copy if the script for episode 1:
Watermelon Project – Trance – Episode 1 Script
-Character Introduction-
Declan and Ken are leaders of the group. There are 3 members of this group Declan Ken and Redd. (Chad doesn't spend as much time with the group) Mel, the female roll is also a part of their lives as she tries to make the group of boys' lives a misery. Declan is the mood raiser of the gang while Ken isn't; this creates constant rivalry.
-SCRIPT-
Declan: That feast was great!
The boys are sitting on a sofa eating a big packet crisps (or "chips" to some people) while watching the TV. Declan fusses around with the TV channels until he comes across the News Channel.
Declan: Guys, look!
Ken: We are, dumbass (Goes for a crisps)
News Reporter: Just in-
News Camera Man: What?
News Reporter: No, not you, Justin! *sigh* Princess Peach has been kidnapped again, but not by Bowser, by a girl named Mel...
News Camera Man: Mel's a bitch!
News Reporter: I don't care you piece of shit!!
The camera man comes from behind the camera to go and argue with the news reporter. The camera man and the news reporter continue to argue...
Camera Man#2: Uh, we're still rolling...
They stop arguing.
News Reporter: And now for the weather.. (She calmly informs)
The camera pans over to the weather man.
Weather Man: The sky is falling!!! Have a nice day!
All but Ken: Mel...! (They intensely growl)
Ken: Who's Mel?
Redd: Mel is the mot evil girl in the world!
Chad: Yeah, she IS a skank, yo..!
Declan: True story!
Ken thinks for a moment..
Ken: Alright, let’s go!
Ken and Declan stand up while Redd and Chad continue to watch the news.
Declan: Where are we going, then FAGIT?
Ken: To you Mom's bedroom.
Chad and Redd laugh at Declan
Declan: Was that meant to be funny?!
Ken: Uh..
Declan: Well, it was anyway! So, where are we going again?
Ken: We're going to give Mel a visit (Projects very unusual, squeaky laughing noises)
Redd: Why? She's a bitch!
Chad: That's what I said (He shouts wildly)
Declan: Well, since we're going to see Mel-the-evil-bitch, I think we should rescue Princess Peach as well!
Ken hesitates.
Ken: But, Isn't that Mario's job?
Declan: Come on! It'll be like hitting two birds with one stone!
[CLIP FLASHES TO AN UNKNOWN TIME]
Declan picks up a stone and throws it in the sky, intending to hit the birds. He succeeds and the birds fall into some grass.
Bird#1: What a lucky bastard!
Bird#2: Yeah...
[FLASHES BACK TO THE PRESENT]
Redd: Yeah, let’s all get Mel!!
(Moment of silence)
Ken: You're not coming.
The boys walk toward the front door and Ken shouts to his Mom up stairs.
Ken: Mom, we're going out and you'll probably never see us again!
Mom: Bye, accident!
The boys walk through a dangerous jungle (as you do!)
Redd: So..
Chad: Shut up.
Declan: You're so cruel, ha-ha!
The jungle rumbles and shakes.
Ken and Declan: What was that?!
They see a boulder come crashing toward them and they run and jump of a cliff. The boys land much further down into the jungle in a cool fashion and then they rub the dirt of themselves.
Declan: Is everyone okay? *pant* *pant*
Ken: We're fine let’s just hurry up and find Peach and Mel, Oh, yes MEL!!
Declan: Okay..?
Redd: Can we get some ice cream...?*Clears throat* Sorry..
The gang looks at Redd.
The trees rustle.
Chad: Not again, man! This sucks!
15 ninjas appear from all around. The boys gasp.
Redd: Why do things like this keep happening?!
Ken turns around.
Ken: You guys keep going, I'll catch up!
Chad: But...
Ken: Do it!
Chad: Layda! (Later)
Redd runs after Chad.
Redd: Wait up!
Declan walks beside Ken with a serious face.
Declan: You better catch up!
Ken nods in a confident way.
Declan runs in Chad's direction.
Declan: (Thinks) this is serious! Somebody is obviously trying to stop us from getting to Peach's castle, well, whoever it is...
*Tense music*
*Tense music stops after a short period*
Declan: ...Is a big, fat meanie!!!
??? (Chad): Hey, bitch!!
Declan turns around.
Chad: You ran strait past us! And where's my ice scream?!
Declan rolls his eyes.
Declan: Ugh..!
-End-
No, I didn't forget today's question of the day: What did you think of the script?
It's not really that easy to give my own opinion but I sure have put alot of hard work into framing.
Since it's the 10th episode, I thought I should do something special! How about I show you guys the script for Trance? I've been working on it for a while now and I know it feels like it's gonna take forever.
Here's a copy if the script for episode 1:
Watermelon Project – Trance – Episode 1 Script
-Character Introduction-
Declan and Ken are leaders of the group. There are 3 members of this group Declan Ken and Redd. (Chad doesn't spend as much time with the group) Mel, the female roll is also a part of their lives as she tries to make the group of boys' lives a misery. Declan is the mood raiser of the gang while Ken isn't; this creates constant rivalry.
-SCRIPT-
Declan: That feast was great!
The boys are sitting on a sofa eating a big packet crisps (or "chips" to some people) while watching the TV. Declan fusses around with the TV channels until he comes across the News Channel.
Declan: Guys, look!
Ken: We are, dumbass (Goes for a crisps)
News Reporter: Just in-
News Camera Man: What?
News Reporter: No, not you, Justin! *sigh* Princess Peach has been kidnapped again, but not by Bowser, by a girl named Mel...
News Camera Man: Mel's a bitch!
News Reporter: I don't care you piece of shit!!
The camera man comes from behind the camera to go and argue with the news reporter. The camera man and the news reporter continue to argue...
Camera Man#2: Uh, we're still rolling...
They stop arguing.
News Reporter: And now for the weather.. (She calmly informs)
The camera pans over to the weather man.
Weather Man: The sky is falling!!! Have a nice day!
All but Ken: Mel...! (They intensely growl)
Ken: Who's Mel?
Redd: Mel is the mot evil girl in the world!
Chad: Yeah, she IS a skank, yo..!
Declan: True story!
Ken thinks for a moment..
Ken: Alright, let’s go!
Ken and Declan stand up while Redd and Chad continue to watch the news.
Declan: Where are we going, then FAGIT?
Ken: To you Mom's bedroom.
Chad and Redd laugh at Declan
Declan: Was that meant to be funny?!
Ken: Uh..
Declan: Well, it was anyway! So, where are we going again?
Ken: We're going to give Mel a visit (Projects very unusual, squeaky laughing noises)
Redd: Why? She's a bitch!
Chad: That's what I said (He shouts wildly)
Declan: Well, since we're going to see Mel-the-evil-bitch, I think we should rescue Princess Peach as well!
Ken hesitates.
Ken: But, Isn't that Mario's job?
Declan: Come on! It'll be like hitting two birds with one stone!
[CLIP FLASHES TO AN UNKNOWN TIME]
Declan picks up a stone and throws it in the sky, intending to hit the birds. He succeeds and the birds fall into some grass.
Bird#1: What a lucky bastard!
Bird#2: Yeah...
[FLASHES BACK TO THE PRESENT]
Redd: Yeah, let’s all get Mel!!
(Moment of silence)
Ken: You're not coming.
The boys walk toward the front door and Ken shouts to his Mom up stairs.
Ken: Mom, we're going out and you'll probably never see us again!
Mom: Bye, accident!
The boys walk through a dangerous jungle (as you do!)
Redd: So..
Chad: Shut up.
Declan: You're so cruel, ha-ha!
The jungle rumbles and shakes.
Ken and Declan: What was that?!
They see a boulder come crashing toward them and they run and jump of a cliff. The boys land much further down into the jungle in a cool fashion and then they rub the dirt of themselves.
Declan: Is everyone okay? *pant* *pant*
Ken: We're fine let’s just hurry up and find Peach and Mel, Oh, yes MEL!!
Declan: Okay..?
Redd: Can we get some ice cream...?*Clears throat* Sorry..
The gang looks at Redd.
The trees rustle.
Chad: Not again, man! This sucks!
15 ninjas appear from all around. The boys gasp.
Redd: Why do things like this keep happening?!
Ken turns around.
Ken: You guys keep going, I'll catch up!
Chad: But...
Ken: Do it!
Chad: Layda! (Later)
Redd runs after Chad.
Redd: Wait up!
Declan walks beside Ken with a serious face.
Declan: You better catch up!
Ken nods in a confident way.
Declan runs in Chad's direction.
Declan: (Thinks) this is serious! Somebody is obviously trying to stop us from getting to Peach's castle, well, whoever it is...
*Tense music*
*Tense music stops after a short period*
Declan: ...Is a big, fat meanie!!!
??? (Chad): Hey, bitch!!
Declan turns around.
Chad: You ran strait past us! And where's my ice scream?!
Declan rolls his eyes.
Declan: Ugh..!
-End-
No, I didn't forget today's question of the day: What did you think of the script?
It's not really that easy to give my own opinion but I sure have put alot of hard work into framing.
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