something i made for a girl i like

[ubertrance]

I'm drifting through the mist of love
To find out where my heart belongs
But every time when I look at you
All I can sing are happy songs

The eyes are truth are on my side
Watching my every move
When I look into your soul
I see it clearly…pure and smooth

I stand where I stand so I can see
The sun hits you just right
You shine right in front of the sun
You are the only person in my sight

As this poem closes I must say
The way I care about you isn’t fray
I must say you are on my mind
Each and every night and day.


(tell me what you think)

 

[Lavama]

Wow.


You are a poet,
and your feet show it.
'cause there Long Fellows.

 

[GAMER_NOW]

At first I thought it was a song. That seems good to me, but I am an unromantic guy.

 

[ubertrance]

QUOTE (GAMER_NOW @ September 08, 2008 09:02 pm) At first I thought it was a song. That seems good to me, but I am an unromantic guy.
i COULD make it a song (cause i can sing well) but i made it a poem

 

[Demon_Skeith]

very nice uber. you got knack for poems.