The Armageddon Game

Regret

The Guy Who Hates Himself
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One day in a video game far far away.... There once was a boy named Nintendo. "Yo wake up!" SSF yelled threw Nintendo's ear. Who what where Tacoz MooCat Cheese! Nintendo screamed as he woke up. "Come on we're gonna miss the Game Stop sale it's buy 20 and get your next one 1% off!" SSF yelled. "Boo ya lets go!" Nintendo replied. Meanwhile...at Game Stop "Hey Bob when do you think it'll be lunchtime?" Phill asked. "Dude we just ate breakfast." Bob said annoyed. "Noooooo"!!! Phill cried. Then something happened. A Boo took over Phill. "Hey you ok?" Bob asked nervously. "All hail lord Bowser!" Phill exclaimed. "What the" Bob started. But then a giant portal appeared and out came Bowser's minions. "I hate this job!" Bob said. To be continued......
 
You should be better with " and also have some space where you said "Meanwhile... at Gamestop"

Anyways, pretty good story so far..
 
Ok now to continue. Back to Nintendo's story. "Hey how do we get there anyways?" Nintendo asked SSF. "Uhhh drive?" SSF replied nervously. "We don't have cars." Nintendo replied. Then a light bulb appeared on top of Nintendo's head. "Turn the light off!" SSF said shielding his eyes from the bright light. Then before you could say mamamia Nintendo smashed the light bulb and $150.99 came out "Let's go to the garage sale before we go." Nintendo said grinning. "Why?" SSF asked curiously. "Remember the flying pokemon they were selling?" Nintendo asked smiling. "Lets go before they sell it!" SSF yelled as he ran out the door as fast as light speed. "Wait for me!" Nintendo yelled rushing out the door. To be continued.....
 
Nice chapter,bro!
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I'll add more characters to. PM me if you wanna be in it.
 
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