Tour Guide

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SuperMarioFanX100

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Well, I'm picking up my story. It's not the sequel to the Shy Guy store. But think of it as, the 3rd in the series. (I will be picking up from where I left off last time later.)
Characters Include, Me, Yoshi, Wasabi Jellyfish, Nintendan and DL.

This is Part 1 of 2.


Well, I lost my job due to the economy and what not.
I needed to find a job and soon. I had rent to pay for my Shy Guy Apartment.
I looked everywhere. I couldn't find any jobs anywhere.
Not only did I have to pay my rent, I also needed to pay for some, "Damages" at the Shy Guy Store.
Then I came across a ad on the Shy Guy Newspaper.
"Person wanted to lead tour. Peppy and happy people preferred."
I was perfect for the job!
Then I looked at the location.
"Please meet at Yoshi's Island for more details."
I sighed. Well, A change of scenery would be nice.
I used the last of my money and bought a plane ticket for Yoshi's Island.
The trip was fantastic.
They showed a movie during the trip. "Shy Guy the Movie: The End of the World"
It was great.
There was this Shy Guy who had to get this thing so he could save the world.
Anywho..... Soon enough the plane landed down on Yoshi's Island Airport.
I eventually got a cab and went to the Location in which they requested.
It seemed empty. There were a few buses near a medium sized hut.
I went inside and saw two other people.
Yoshi and Wasabi Jellyfish.
"Oh no. Not Wasabi!" I thought to myself.
I'm sure he still hates me for the incident back at the museum.
Thanks to the Mess me, dan and General Guy made at the Museum, Wasabi Lost his job there.
But that's a story for another time.
For now it was pretty obvious he wanted the job as the tour guide.
We gave each other rivalish looks.
Yoshi then spoke. "Well then. I guess this'll have to be a competition for who can "tour" the best!"
"You're going down!" Wasabi screamed. "You can't have this job. I deserve this job way more than you!"
I gulped.
Wasabi was right. He deserved it way more than me, but then again. I still needed that job.
I was saving up for something special.
Yoshi then Spoke.
"Well then. Each of you will lead a tour and I will supervise. The person who makes the tour more interesting wins the job!"
Well, within a few hours it was time to start.
I was the first to drive around Yoshi's Island.
Yoshi was in the seat right behind me with a Notebook.
Wasabi was sitting right next to him.
I started up the Bus and drove into the Jungle.
The bus was full of people. I had to make sure of two things.
1, that I followed the Trail perfectly.
And 2, That I was funny while announcing stuff.
As I continued driving I noticed ruffling in the near by Bushes.
I didn't think much of it and continued driving.
Then I saw a Shy Guy in some Native American style Camo run across the road.
I pushed on the breaks before I hit the Shy Guy and a succeeded in dodging him. They Shy Guy continued walking like he never even almost died.
He then vanished.
The I remembered I had tourists on the Bus.
I looked back and saw some people rubbing their heads. I felt bad.
Yoshi Gave me a Angry look and Wasabi Gave me and Evil Smile.
Then someone (DL) yelled out.
"HEY!' LEARN TO DRIVE! WHERE'D YOU LEARN TO DRIVE? BIRDO'S SCHOOL OF DRIVING?" Everyone laughed at his joke.
I gave a weak laugh and continued the tour.
I gave an apology over the intercom.
I had to be on tiptop shape to win the job.
With all that went on I almost forgot to be funny during the tour!
Immediately at the halfway mark I started making humorous comments about the surrounding areas.
No one laughed.
Not even with my joke about the Yoshi Lake and the Dinosaur! That cracks everybody up!
DL instead took it upon him to make his own comments.
And they weren’t about the tour. They were about the tour guide. Me. And how I was epically failing at touring.
Every joke. And I mean EVERY joke that DL made about me made everyone laugh.
I felt horrible.
I knew wasabi was already doing a victory Dance inside his little mind.
I had to change things NOW if I wanted the job.
But there was a problem.
THE TOUR WAS ALREADY OVER!
What the fudge?
I failed.
But there was still I glimmer of hope.
I had to sabotage Wasabi’s tour.
I needed that job and would do anything to take it.



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I figured that was a good place to stop and what not. Anyway, I'm already working on part two as I speak.
 
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Ruh-roh! Looks like Wasabi is in for it! Great use of first person narration, I really felt like I was there! :]

I just have one comment of helpful criticism--I wonder if formatting this into paragraphs with indents and such would make this a little easier to read, my eyes kept darting back and forth so I lost my place a few times. :3!
 
Arcella said:
Ruh-roh! Looks like Wasabi is in for it! Great use of first person narration, I really felt like I was there! :]

I just have one comment of helpful criticism--I wonder if formatting this into paragraphs with indents and such would make this a little easier to read, my eyes kept darting back and forth so I lost my place a few times. :3!
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Ok. Will do.
 
I feel bad for the protagonist! I want to know how you ruin Wasabi's tour. :3
 
Part 2.....
It felt a bit rushed but, here it is.....
Anyway my 3rd story will be way better......
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When the tour was over, Yoshi declared it Lunchtime. I was going to use this as the time to sabotage Wasabi’s Bus. He would use that bus and his trip would go horribly wrong! I was an evil genius! I got to work with my trusty Wrench and Screwdriver. However, unknown to me, Wasabi had his own plans. He wanted to talk to DL alone. When they were alone they started their conversation.

“So DL, good job on out funnying SMF. You really made him look bad.” Wasabi said.

“Don’t mention it. Now give me my $100 bucks.” DL said.

Wasabi gave him an eerie look. “Yeah about that. HEY LOOK OVER THERE!”

DL quickly turned around and when his back was turned. BAM! Wasabi had hit DL with a shovel, knocking him out cold.

“Sorry, but um. I’m a bit shy with money at the moment so sorry. Besides I can’t let you sabotage my tour. That’d be bad.” Wasabi said with an evil grin.

Wasabi dumped DL’s body into the trunk of one of the tour buses.

“I’ll come and get you later.” Wasabi said, closing the trunk.

Meanwhile both Wasabi and I had arrived back to the lunch grounds. They were screening a movie. “Shy Guy the Movie 2. From Shytopia, with love.” I caught the end and it was amazing. Shy Guy had this long lost brother he didn’t even know about and while trying to figure out who his brother was, he had to save the world from The Mad Guy, who in the end, IS Shy Guy’s Brother! What a movie.!

Anyway once the movie was done it was tour time again. However something shocked me. Yoshi said we’d be using the tour bus I used. DANG IT! It was over. I would lose the job. Once everyone got on the bus Wasabi started driving. I was sitting next to Yoshi and saw everything he was writing. He was getting a better review than me. His tour, as much as I didn’t want to admit it was better than mine. His jokes were way funnier than mine. I turned around in hopes that I would see DL ready to make rude comments like he did to me, but he wasn’t riding with us. Now how was that fair? His tour was going perfectly. I lost. I looked down in shame when suddenly. BUMPY BUMPY BUMPY. What happened?

I heard some people gasp and everyone started to go outside. I followed. Wasabi had run over a native Shy Guy!................................................

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Everyone was quiet. But in my head I was “YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! I’m GOING TO GET THE JOB!”

Then I! I was out stared hearing noises in the bushes. Everyone did. Then out of the bushes came around 50 or 60 Shy Guys. They had sticks in which they used to knock us out. I tried running away but they jumped on the and then WHACK I was out cold.

The next thing I knew I was in a cave tied to some sort of pillar. There were pillars everywhere in a big circle. People were tied to the pillars. But what was shocking was in the center of the cave; there was a lava pool. It was giving off heat even from my distance. The Shy Guys were dancing around the edge of the pool right in front of us. It was like some sort of ritual type thing. The to my luck I wasn’t alone. Everyone on the tour was tied to the surrounding pillars too. And to my Luck. Wasabi was tied next to me. Ugh.

Then the other Shy Guys stopped dancing. They lined up in 2 lines from the cave entrance. And in came Nintedan. He had the native paint markings on his face. Even though this worried my a bit, I knew Nintendan would let us go.

He then spoke. “Attention strangers! You have trespassed on the Shy Guy Clan Shyop territory! You will be punished!” He announced.

“Hey!” I yelled. “Dan! It’s me! SMF! You mind letting us go!” I said.

Then he ran up to me.

“Who dares interrupt me?” He said.

“It’s me! SMF! And look. It’s Wasabi too!” I said.

He started poking me with a stick.

“Stop it!” I yelled. “Just let us go!’

“NEVER! YOU AND EVERYONE ELSE WILL BE PUNISHED FOR TRESSPASSING ON OUR LAND!” Dan announced. “YOU WILL BE TIED ON A ROPE AND ONE BY ONE BE DUMPED INTO THE LAVA POOL! FROM THERE WE WILL EAT YOU ALL AS OUR CHICKEN DINNER!” He said.

Before I could say anything Wasabi yelled out. “DAN! YOU’VE FREAKING GONE CRAZY! WHAT ARE YOU EVEN DOING HERE?” he yelled out in a panicked tone.

“Silence! You will be eaten first!” Dan proclaimed.

Wasabi’s jaw dropped.

“Now someone hand me rope!” Dan said looking at the other Shy Guys.

“That means NAO!” Dan Yelled out.

“We don’t have any rope.” A random Shy Guy said.

“Say What?” Dan questioned. “We don’t have rope? Then where are we going to get some?”

Wasabi then said. “Ooh! There’s some at Yoshi’s Tour Guide hut!”

As soon as he said that everyone of the tour just screamed out his name in anger.

“Am I not going to be eaten first now?” Wasabi said.

“Well then….” Dan said. “No. You’re still going first.”

“What? Come on” Wasabi whimpered.

“NO! Now come on Shy Guys! To Yoshi’s hut!” Nintendan yelled out as he led his followers out of the cave.

Now we were all alone. We had to escape before the came back. All of us tried struggling out of our ropes. It didn’t work.

Just then at the entrance of the cave came someone. Could they be back so soon? But then we saw that it was DL. He was rubbing his head in pain.

We called his name and we explained what happened. He started untying all of us. Those who were untied immediately ran off. Then DL finally reached me and Wasabi.

“Well, well, well. Hi there Wasabi. Remember me? I was the guy who you hit in the back of the head with a shovel and stuffed in the back of a tour bus.” DL said actually quite calmy.

“I’m sorry. There. Now do you mind freeing me?” Wasabi said.

“Yes actually. So…… sorry SMF. I can’t untie you without untying Wasabi so….”

“WHAT?” I yelled. “DUDE! COME ON! YOU CAN’T BE SEROUSLY BE CONSIDERING LETTING ME GET EATEN JUST BECAUSE YOU HATE WASABI?”

“Well, yea actually.” DL said,

My jaw dropped. I was going to die. I was going to be eaten as fried chicken by Dan and the other native Shy Guys. Why was Dan even leading those guys?

“PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!” Both me and Wasabi yelled.

“Nope.” DL said as he left the cave.

We were going to die.

20 minuets passed when I saw Yoshi running back in.

“Yoshi!” Both wasabi and me yelled.

“Finally I found you guys! Didn’t DL untie you guys?” Yoshi said as he started untying us.

“No. He’s all mad at Wasabi for apparently hitting him with a shovel.” I said.

“What? Wasabi why in the world would you do that?” Yoshi said as he finally undid the final knot.

“I’ve gotta go now. So Bye!” Wasabi said as he ran out of the cave.

Then Yoshi and me also ran out. Everyone successfully ran out of the cave. No one was eaten as fried chicken.

I immediately left the island. I snuck in a plane as luggage. I don’t know what happened as in who got the job, or what happened to Nintendan and stuff like that. But I didn’t care. I left alive and I was happy with that.

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Yoshi said:
Aw, that was a very saddening ending.
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It was very rushed. But everything is ok. My 3rd... wait no fourth story will bring closure to the untied parts of the story. Like what happens to Dan and DL. Or You......
 
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