Tales of Speed

[go away hernandez]

You know what,lock this topic cause It's so disorganized.

We don't need a lock,you need to listen to our critisim,and maybe try to write a better story than just Sonic recolors plus a bajillioIn characters?

This is what I'm getting so far:

Cinos and the rest of his look alikes were in some battle.OH NOES.Yoshian decides to MAKE PORTALS OUTTA NOWHERE AND EVERY SINGLE GAME CHARACTER COMES AND FIGHTS.The rest is fighting.SOME SHIT IS GOING DOWN NEXT TIME.

That's pretty short.

Try to make it better,and longer?

Its fan fiction. Anything is possible in fiction. Now quit typing in caps and making yourself look stupid, and quit criticizing SSF's work. I think this is a pretty good story for a fan fiction, keep up the good work SSF. I think this is really good.

Look,I know I'm gonna sound rude..

But this isn't the worlds greatest fanfic. It's pretty bad, he just smushed everything he wanted into it, and made it a giant mess.


He knows it wasn't that great of a written fanfic,so he's re-doing it.Which is good.

SSF,I'll be honest with you:finish it when you're older or so.

I'm canceling it and gonna re-write.I'm not gonna finish it.

No! You are doing a good job. Its ok to have some spelling errors. You can fix them later.

It's not JUST the spelling errors.

IT'S THE FACT THAT IT'S WRITTEN TERRIBLY.
Everything is out of place. EVERYTHING IS JUST CRAMMED IN.
IT'S A TERRIBLE STORY AND YOU HAVE TO NOTICE THAT.
EVEN HE NOTICES IT,WHY CAN'T YOU!?

 

[Member]

It's not JUST the spelling errors.

IT'S THE FACT THAT IT'S WRITTEN TERRIBLY.
Everything is out of place. EVERYTHING IS JUST CRAMMED IN.
IT'S A TERRIBLE STORY AND YOU HAVE TO NOTICE THAT.
EVEN HE NOTICES IT,WHY CAN'T YOU!?



It's not terrible Shitmin, you're just being an ***hole about the story and me. He can always fix it up later on.